This is very moody - has a 'film noir' feel. I think it would lend both interest and further ambience if you imagined that scenery just outside the frame of this image, was casting light and shadow onto that vignette of silhouetted foreground - as if the light through a window or through a lattice work of junk (just outside of the composition) was being projected onto that otherwise unpicked-out surface: as dramatic and 'graphical' as this:
It just feels that you have an opportunity to pick out some of the details more so, using rim-lighting and projected light to really create a sense of the corrugation and density of all that piled up crap...
This is very moody - has a 'film noir' feel. I think it would lend both interest and further ambience if you imagined that scenery just outside the frame of this image, was casting light and shadow onto that vignette of silhouetted foreground - as if the light through a window or through a lattice work of junk (just outside of the composition) was being projected onto that otherwise unpicked-out surface: as dramatic and 'graphical' as this:
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It just feels that you have an opportunity to pick out some of the details more so, using rim-lighting and projected light to really create a sense of the corrugation and density of all that piled up crap...
Okay Phil I'll get working on it!
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