tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post176441807306800794..comments2023-05-28T04:10:43.515-07:00Comments on Lewis Punton Animation: Metropolis - Reviewlewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16242686673279500409noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post-34753293692865474892015-10-03T08:58:39.634-07:002015-10-03T08:58:39.634-07:00Thank you Phil, will do in the future!Thank you Phil, will do in the future!lewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16242686673279500409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post-15193548506100065402015-10-03T01:07:56.156-07:002015-10-03T01:07:56.156-07:00Good content, and it's very satisfying seeing ...Good content, and it's very satisfying seeing you connecting up references and building/proving your arguments. There's an authenticity to your writing - a review written, not simply to satisfy your brief, but to satisfy your curiosity. Just a few observations: in terms of presentation, avoid the 'centralised text' layout and remember to italicise your quotes. I'd suggest you might consider upping the size of your images too.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com