tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post5109520476007825451..comments2023-05-28T04:10:43.515-07:00Comments on Lewis Punton Animation: The Birds - Film Reviewlewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16242686673279500409noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post-8223064934020947252016-01-27T03:52:11.596-08:002016-01-27T03:52:11.596-08:00'... that are in fact delivering her to the bi...'... that are in fact delivering her to the birds of the Bay, almost like the way a mother bird will return to her nest of hatchlings with a meal and then regurgitate to feed her young.' <br />Excellent review Lewis :) <br /><br />Just make sure that you proofread - you have written Bah instead of Bay a couple of times, and your font changes style after the first paragraph... small niggles, but they do make a difference :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920801363552991220.post-40305048345398778762016-01-26T13:31:25.810-08:002016-01-26T13:31:25.810-08:00"Melanie seems hugely out of place as she par..."Melanie seems hugely out of place as she parades the area amongst shore workers and humble towns folk in her metropolitan dress and heels, some would say like a peacock amongst seagulls..." That's a lovely observation, Lewis :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com